Tuesday, 6 May 2014

       6th May 2014 - Getting all the information and making them persuasive

Today's activity was also fun and easy. I love changing normal information into persuasive language as I am quite good at it! Most of the information on the design will remain the same becuase they are quite persuasive and appealing. I just did not like the introduction to Facebook. It was very simple and straightforward even though it is one of the most important parts in the video. The introduction is the one of the most important parts of the video as this is the part which actually keeps the audience hooked to the video. If the introduciton is boring, then nobody would want to sit through the video even if it is interesting afterwards! So today, I changed the introduction a little, making it more appealing and alluring. I also changed one of the titles. Here is what I did today: 



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